Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Posting a collection of shorts.
I came onto blogspot to get constructive critism of the romance shorts that I have written myself .. But it seems that I have come to a brick wall at this time because even though I did ad it to my mylot page becuase I wasn't sure I would post the same here as there . But I have and that is only in attempts to reach more people.. Unfortunately I have now had to close my blog to anonymous people who are verbally abusive and offer no constructive critism. I hope that if they don't like my stories that they just now how to move on. I'm sorry that they feel that it is rubbish but I made them for others that wanted to hear a short .. I will continue to accept comment to my blogs but only from people who expose who they are. Thank you and have a nice day.
Saturday, April 12, 2008
She woke in a tangle of sheets!!!
Isabella woke in a tangle of sheets with the thoughts of “ what the f*ck am I doing here and where is here?”. She struggled to see where she was and all she could make out was a huge room that actually had an armoire, tall dresser, entertainment stand, and two end table on each side of the queen size sleigh bed and it was all made of cherry wood. Even in the dark the room was gorgeous and expensive. The bed she was in was done in silk sheets and the softest down comforter that she had ever had. Isabella tentively drew back the covers and looked down. She was wearing an elegant silk nightgown.
“What the hell was going on?” she thought. Taking a step out of the bed she started walking toward when she heard foot steps in the hallway. She turned and got back in bed in enough time to pretend she was still sleeping. “I thought you said she be up by now?” said a woman voice. “ I thought she would. I'm not perfect with my guesses?” said a guy voice. “ So you think she remembers anything that has happened to her?” the woman said. “ I doubt it she took a pretty good fall and I have no clue what she'll remember I can only her she remembers who she was running from and why she was so terriefied.” “ Can you read her and find out?” “No!! I haven't and wouldn't do that without her permission. She needs to be able to trust us Angelic.” “I don't care I just want the information from her mind and I want it now Lucas. There is something about her that unsettles me. I just can't but my finger on it. I want her back to where ever she came from and get on with our search of why so many are going missing and if this one has escaped and how?” “ Angelic, there are always better ways to get what we want and not take it.!” “ You're so naive Lucas. The only way to ensure you get what you want is to take it for yourself.” “I'm sorry but, I'm not you and I won't just take when there is another way! Plus can't you tell that she is not just human?” “ I didn't even take time to notice she was just another piece of the puzzle I didn't even try and sense what she was. Listen Dhampire you might be from the oldest and wealthiest family and this may be your house but I'm in charge here.” Lucas whirls around on Angelic and grabs her by the throat and throws her against the wall. “ You might be in charge of finding out what is going on in this investigation but I guarantee that if you force my hand on this you won't see it coming. This is my house and my rules on how my guests are treated. Do not try and order me around.” Gasping for air Angelic rubs her neck as soon as he lets go and she slides to the ground. “You are still a young man you have no clue of who you are dealing with you cocky b@stard.” Angelic sputtered menacingly. “Get out of this house and leave know Angelic before you anger me and get nothing for your case. Either you let me get the information my way or you don't get it at all.” Lucas stated as he shoved Angelic out of the doorway and down the hallway. Getting the point that it would be better for her to leave Angelic walked down the hall to her room. As soon as she was out of sight Lucas knocked on the door before entering the room. He looked around the room and sensed that she was awake by the sound of her breathing and heart rate. “ Mademoiselle, I know you are awake I can hear it in your breathing. I want to assure you that you are in no danger and free to go when you are feeling well enough you are no prisoner. Do you remember passing out in the middle of the woods? Do you remember what you were running from and why? I would really wish not to put you into harms way once you leave.” Isabella sat up and looked at Lucas with wide eyes in the dark. “I don't remember to be honest, one minute I was doing research on a case and the next I was here waking up in this room. I have no clue what anyone would want with me. I'm just a simple person with a simple job nothing special about me at all!” Isabella stated. “Are you sure there is nothing special about you?” Lucas stated with an eyebrow raised. Isabella sniffed into the air to see what she smelled was a mixture of vanilla and cinnamon spice. It tickled her nose and the smell was so mouth watering and enticingly delicious. She then smelled the musk of lepoard underneath the cinnamon and vanilla. Her eyes narrowed and she looked into Lucas' eyes and saw among the green eyes the Nim-Raj within. She felt something stir within her and couldn't figure out what it was and why and how could she sent that. What is wrong with her she must be going insane. “ Nope nothing special about me at all just a normal small town girl off to make in the big bad world” Isabella said sarcastically. With an incredulous look at her he asked,” What is your name, my dear? And what are your parents my dear? You smell of were and something else “ “ What are you talking about my mom and dad are human and my name is Isabella.” Shaking her head gently from side to side she was thinking that she must have hit her head a little too hard and wasn't hearing correctly. “ Bella, you have more power within than you know I can sense and smell it . Have you not changed yet? “ Lucas looked extremely puzzled by the fact that she didn't seem to know that she was were and something else. The other part of here smelled like a frosted cupcake with a hint of cherry. Oh god she smell so good that he felt his teeth slid into place. No can't have that happen, can't have her run away screaming from the house. Concentrating extremely hard he was able to concentrate on getting the answers and not trying to pin her to the bed and lick every inch of her body to see if it actually tasted as good as she smelled. copywrited by Bellaofchaos. So what do you think of the start of my novel. LOL!!!
“What the hell was going on?” she thought. Taking a step out of the bed she started walking toward when she heard foot steps in the hallway. She turned and got back in bed in enough time to pretend she was still sleeping. “I thought you said she be up by now?” said a woman voice. “ I thought she would. I'm not perfect with my guesses?” said a guy voice. “ So you think she remembers anything that has happened to her?” the woman said. “ I doubt it she took a pretty good fall and I have no clue what she'll remember I can only her she remembers who she was running from and why she was so terriefied.” “ Can you read her and find out?” “No!! I haven't and wouldn't do that without her permission. She needs to be able to trust us Angelic.” “I don't care I just want the information from her mind and I want it now Lucas. There is something about her that unsettles me. I just can't but my finger on it. I want her back to where ever she came from and get on with our search of why so many are going missing and if this one has escaped and how?” “ Angelic, there are always better ways to get what we want and not take it.!” “ You're so naive Lucas. The only way to ensure you get what you want is to take it for yourself.” “I'm sorry but, I'm not you and I won't just take when there is another way! Plus can't you tell that she is not just human?” “ I didn't even take time to notice she was just another piece of the puzzle I didn't even try and sense what she was. Listen Dhampire you might be from the oldest and wealthiest family and this may be your house but I'm in charge here.” Lucas whirls around on Angelic and grabs her by the throat and throws her against the wall. “ You might be in charge of finding out what is going on in this investigation but I guarantee that if you force my hand on this you won't see it coming. This is my house and my rules on how my guests are treated. Do not try and order me around.” Gasping for air Angelic rubs her neck as soon as he lets go and she slides to the ground. “You are still a young man you have no clue of who you are dealing with you cocky b@stard.” Angelic sputtered menacingly. “Get out of this house and leave know Angelic before you anger me and get nothing for your case. Either you let me get the information my way or you don't get it at all.” Lucas stated as he shoved Angelic out of the doorway and down the hallway. Getting the point that it would be better for her to leave Angelic walked down the hall to her room. As soon as she was out of sight Lucas knocked on the door before entering the room. He looked around the room and sensed that she was awake by the sound of her breathing and heart rate. “ Mademoiselle, I know you are awake I can hear it in your breathing. I want to assure you that you are in no danger and free to go when you are feeling well enough you are no prisoner. Do you remember passing out in the middle of the woods? Do you remember what you were running from and why? I would really wish not to put you into harms way once you leave.” Isabella sat up and looked at Lucas with wide eyes in the dark. “I don't remember to be honest, one minute I was doing research on a case and the next I was here waking up in this room. I have no clue what anyone would want with me. I'm just a simple person with a simple job nothing special about me at all!” Isabella stated. “Are you sure there is nothing special about you?” Lucas stated with an eyebrow raised. Isabella sniffed into the air to see what she smelled was a mixture of vanilla and cinnamon spice. It tickled her nose and the smell was so mouth watering and enticingly delicious. She then smelled the musk of lepoard underneath the cinnamon and vanilla. Her eyes narrowed and she looked into Lucas' eyes and saw among the green eyes the Nim-Raj within. She felt something stir within her and couldn't figure out what it was and why and how could she sent that. What is wrong with her she must be going insane. “ Nope nothing special about me at all just a normal small town girl off to make in the big bad world” Isabella said sarcastically. With an incredulous look at her he asked,” What is your name, my dear? And what are your parents my dear? You smell of were and something else “ “ What are you talking about my mom and dad are human and my name is Isabella.” Shaking her head gently from side to side she was thinking that she must have hit her head a little too hard and wasn't hearing correctly. “ Bella, you have more power within than you know I can sense and smell it . Have you not changed yet? “ Lucas looked extremely puzzled by the fact that she didn't seem to know that she was were and something else. The other part of here smelled like a frosted cupcake with a hint of cherry. Oh god she smell so good that he felt his teeth slid into place. No can't have that happen, can't have her run away screaming from the house. Concentrating extremely hard he was able to concentrate on getting the answers and not trying to pin her to the bed and lick every inch of her body to see if it actually tasted as good as she smelled. copywrited by Bellaofchaos. So what do you think of the start of my novel. LOL!!!
A hot and Steamy Seduction!
Amy opened up her email and saw a letter from Adam. Knowing full well that personal emails were against company policy she decided to open it anyway, feeling a little guilty while she read it.
Amy,
I have a special evening planned for you, filled with lost of fun and food.
Adam
Hmmm, Amy thought, Must be throwing a party for someone or some reason. If only he could pput that much though into date night, she sighed. As of late their romantic relationship had been a bit boring and she long for the days when their romance had be exciting and quite a bit interesting. All through work Amy was getting more andmore frustrated with Adam. Why oh why can't he think of something just for the two of us and spice up this relationship somehow.
When she arrived home she walked through the door to find the room was dark except fo ra few candles placed on the coffee table, she also notice that the smell of vanilla and strawberries permeated the room and that there was a little elegant card on the table by the candles. The card read.
Amy my dear,
I know we haven't had much time as of late for us and I'mve decided to you deserve a little bit of pampering, so if you would follow the rose petals to you next destination you will glimpse what I have in store for you tonight.
Putting the card down Amy followed the trail of white as snow rose petals to the bathroom door. On the door was another card telling her to disrobe before entering and to put on the robe and the blind fold on the door knob and when she was done to knock three times. Doing as she was told she put on the robe and blind fold, after dropping her clothes in a pile beside the door. Knocking she wondered what she was in store for. She heard the door open.
All her senses where strainging to hear and smell what was around her. Adam took her hand and led her to the jacuzzi tube they had and let her walk into it. She smelled the vanilla stronger here and also a hint of lavender. Mmmm. this smells yummy and feels great as she slipped into the large Jacuzzi tube that was big enough to set three to four people.
"Amy no matter what I want you to keep on the blind fold ok and please just do as I ask." Adam requested huskily.
Interesting thought amy as Adam led her into the tub where she felt bubbles all around her, suddenly she felt Adam step into the tub behind as he positioned her leaning on the sid eof the tub with a bath pillow for her front to rest on. Adam slowly started to message the jasmine scented body wash over her shoulders and down her back squeezing her firm buttocks and making sure to take extra special care as he moved her around to get her front where he started at her feet and then moved up to her nether regions paying extra special care to her vulva and clitoris, he then teasingly flittered across her tummy making it feel like a bunch of butterflies had just caressed her skin. When he made it to her breasts he gently kissed and sucked each one of her nipples making them hard and pointy,but he didn't stop there. Adam continued to continued lather then in circular motions teasing each nipple when he had the chance. Amy could feel a pool of warmth gathering between her legs as he continue to massage her breast and nibble her neck and ears. He then slowly moved her so that he was behind her but he was still massaging her breast. Slowly his errect penis penetrated her and she felt the pool of warmth spread all over her as she felt him inside her stroking the most intimimate of places inside her. She felt like every part of her was singing and humming to life. She was so overwhelmed with pleasure that she didn't hear herself cry out and then with both of their bodies spasming she felt an explosion happen inside her that brought stars to her eyes. Her senses were on complete overload.
" Amy hun your finally awake."
" How did I get here? We were in the bath tub last I remember" she stated.
Amy looked around her and saw the she layed in bed with the blood red satin sheets around her. She also saw that there was a table brought into the bedroom and saw thet there seem to be food spreed out over it. What she saw on the table was some bittersweet chocolate truffles cut into squares cupped by the deepest red rose petals that she ever saw. Beside that was a bottle of the top Champaigne on ice and two fluted glasses with rose petals in them. next to that was another dish this was of a Maine Lobster and Fava bean salad beside that was some Golden roasted potatoes with rosemary, also there was sone poached salman with Orchids. The plates were all beautifully design and she notice that there was only serving silverware wondering how the were going to eat it she turned to look at Adam as he lifted the lid on the very last dish of pineapple and Raspberries her favorit fruits.
" Did I not tell you that I had planned a night of fun and food. Well here is food but the fun part is going to be eating off of eachother. I'm sorry that I have neglected you for way to long. Do you accept my apology?"
" Adam, if this is how you apologize yep I accept!"
Adam then piced up the Bittersweat chocolate truffles and began to feed them to her. Amy thought I'm going to be in for a night full of fun and passion. The end. So my questions is how did you like my short story? And did you want another? Have a nice day everyone!!!!
Amy,
I have a special evening planned for you, filled with lost of fun and food.
Adam
Hmmm, Amy thought, Must be throwing a party for someone or some reason. If only he could pput that much though into date night, she sighed. As of late their romantic relationship had been a bit boring and she long for the days when their romance had be exciting and quite a bit interesting. All through work Amy was getting more andmore frustrated with Adam. Why oh why can't he think of something just for the two of us and spice up this relationship somehow.
When she arrived home she walked through the door to find the room was dark except fo ra few candles placed on the coffee table, she also notice that the smell of vanilla and strawberries permeated the room and that there was a little elegant card on the table by the candles. The card read.
Amy my dear,
I know we haven't had much time as of late for us and I'mve decided to you deserve a little bit of pampering, so if you would follow the rose petals to you next destination you will glimpse what I have in store for you tonight.
Putting the card down Amy followed the trail of white as snow rose petals to the bathroom door. On the door was another card telling her to disrobe before entering and to put on the robe and the blind fold on the door knob and when she was done to knock three times. Doing as she was told she put on the robe and blind fold, after dropping her clothes in a pile beside the door. Knocking she wondered what she was in store for. She heard the door open.
All her senses where strainging to hear and smell what was around her. Adam took her hand and led her to the jacuzzi tube they had and let her walk into it. She smelled the vanilla stronger here and also a hint of lavender. Mmmm. this smells yummy and feels great as she slipped into the large Jacuzzi tube that was big enough to set three to four people.
"Amy no matter what I want you to keep on the blind fold ok and please just do as I ask." Adam requested huskily.
Interesting thought amy as Adam led her into the tub where she felt bubbles all around her, suddenly she felt Adam step into the tub behind as he positioned her leaning on the sid eof the tub with a bath pillow for her front to rest on. Adam slowly started to message the jasmine scented body wash over her shoulders and down her back squeezing her firm buttocks and making sure to take extra special care as he moved her around to get her front where he started at her feet and then moved up to her nether regions paying extra special care to her vulva and clitoris, he then teasingly flittered across her tummy making it feel like a bunch of butterflies had just caressed her skin. When he made it to her breasts he gently kissed and sucked each one of her nipples making them hard and pointy,but he didn't stop there. Adam continued to continued lather then in circular motions teasing each nipple when he had the chance. Amy could feel a pool of warmth gathering between her legs as he continue to massage her breast and nibble her neck and ears. He then slowly moved her so that he was behind her but he was still massaging her breast. Slowly his errect penis penetrated her and she felt the pool of warmth spread all over her as she felt him inside her stroking the most intimimate of places inside her. She felt like every part of her was singing and humming to life. She was so overwhelmed with pleasure that she didn't hear herself cry out and then with both of their bodies spasming she felt an explosion happen inside her that brought stars to her eyes. Her senses were on complete overload.
" Amy hun your finally awake."
" How did I get here? We were in the bath tub last I remember" she stated.
Amy looked around her and saw the she layed in bed with the blood red satin sheets around her. She also saw that there was a table brought into the bedroom and saw thet there seem to be food spreed out over it. What she saw on the table was some bittersweet chocolate truffles cut into squares cupped by the deepest red rose petals that she ever saw. Beside that was a bottle of the top Champaigne on ice and two fluted glasses with rose petals in them. next to that was another dish this was of a Maine Lobster and Fava bean salad beside that was some Golden roasted potatoes with rosemary, also there was sone poached salman with Orchids. The plates were all beautifully design and she notice that there was only serving silverware wondering how the were going to eat it she turned to look at Adam as he lifted the lid on the very last dish of pineapple and Raspberries her favorit fruits.
" Did I not tell you that I had planned a night of fun and food. Well here is food but the fun part is going to be eating off of eachother. I'm sorry that I have neglected you for way to long. Do you accept my apology?"
" Adam, if this is how you apologize yep I accept!"
Adam then piced up the Bittersweat chocolate truffles and began to feed them to her. Amy thought I'm going to be in for a night full of fun and passion. The end. So my questions is how did you like my short story? And did you want another? Have a nice day everyone!!!!
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