Isabella woke in a tangle of sheets with the thoughts of “ what the f*ck am I doing here and where is here?”. She struggled to see where she was and all she could make out was a huge room that actually had an armoire, tall dresser, entertainment stand, and two end table on each side of the queen size sleigh bed and it was all made of cherry wood. Even in the dark the room was gorgeous and expensive. The bed she was in was done in silk sheets and the softest down comforter that she had ever had. Isabella tentively drew back the covers and looked down. She was wearing an elegant silk nightgown.
“What the hell was going on?” she thought. Taking a step out of the bed she started walking toward when she heard foot steps in the hallway. She turned and got back in bed in enough time to pretend she was still sleeping. “I thought you said she be up by now?” said a woman voice. “ I thought she would. I'm not perfect with my guesses?” said a guy voice. “ So you think she remembers anything that has happened to her?” the woman said. “ I doubt it she took a pretty good fall and I have no clue what she'll remember I can only her she remembers who she was running from and why she was so terriefied.” “ Can you read her and find out?” “No!! I haven't and wouldn't do that without her permission. She needs to be able to trust us Angelic.” “I don't care I just want the information from her mind and I want it now Lucas. There is something about her that unsettles me. I just can't but my finger on it. I want her back to where ever she came from and get on with our search of why so many are going missing and if this one has escaped and how?” “ Angelic, there are always better ways to get what we want and not take it.!” “ You're so naive Lucas. The only way to ensure you get what you want is to take it for yourself.” “I'm sorry but, I'm not you and I won't just take when there is another way! Plus can't you tell that she is not just human?” “ I didn't even take time to notice she was just another piece of the puzzle I didn't even try and sense what she was. Listen Dhampire you might be from the oldest and wealthiest family and this may be your house but I'm in charge here.” Lucas whirls around on Angelic and grabs her by the throat and throws her against the wall. “ You might be in charge of finding out what is going on in this investigation but I guarantee that if you force my hand on this you won't see it coming. This is my house and my rules on how my guests are treated. Do not try and order me around.” Gasping for air Angelic rubs her neck as soon as he lets go and she slides to the ground. “You are still a young man you have no clue of who you are dealing with you cocky b@stard.” Angelic sputtered menacingly. “Get out of this house and leave know Angelic before you anger me and get nothing for your case. Either you let me get the information my way or you don't get it at all.” Lucas stated as he shoved Angelic out of the doorway and down the hallway. Getting the point that it would be better for her to leave Angelic walked down the hall to her room. As soon as she was out of sight Lucas knocked on the door before entering the room. He looked around the room and sensed that she was awake by the sound of her breathing and heart rate. “ Mademoiselle, I know you are awake I can hear it in your breathing. I want to assure you that you are in no danger and free to go when you are feeling well enough you are no prisoner. Do you remember passing out in the middle of the woods? Do you remember what you were running from and why? I would really wish not to put you into harms way once you leave.” Isabella sat up and looked at Lucas with wide eyes in the dark. “I don't remember to be honest, one minute I was doing research on a case and the next I was here waking up in this room. I have no clue what anyone would want with me. I'm just a simple person with a simple job nothing special about me at all!” Isabella stated. “Are you sure there is nothing special about you?” Lucas stated with an eyebrow raised. Isabella sniffed into the air to see what she smelled was a mixture of vanilla and cinnamon spice. It tickled her nose and the smell was so mouth watering and enticingly delicious. She then smelled the musk of lepoard underneath the cinnamon and vanilla. Her eyes narrowed and she looked into Lucas' eyes and saw among the green eyes the Nim-Raj within. She felt something stir within her and couldn't figure out what it was and why and how could she sent that. What is wrong with her she must be going insane. “ Nope nothing special about me at all just a normal small town girl off to make in the big bad world” Isabella said sarcastically. With an incredulous look at her he asked,” What is your name, my dear? And what are your parents my dear? You smell of were and something else “ “ What are you talking about my mom and dad are human and my name is Isabella.” Shaking her head gently from side to side she was thinking that she must have hit her head a little too hard and wasn't hearing correctly. “ Bella, you have more power within than you know I can sense and smell it . Have you not changed yet? “ Lucas looked extremely puzzled by the fact that she didn't seem to know that she was were and something else. The other part of here smelled like a frosted cupcake with a hint of cherry. Oh god she smell so good that he felt his teeth slid into place. No can't have that happen, can't have her run away screaming from the house. Concentrating extremely hard he was able to concentrate on getting the answers and not trying to pin her to the bed and lick every inch of her body to see if it actually tasted as good as she smelled. copywrited by Bellaofchaos. So what do you think of the start of my novel. LOL!!!
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your as rubbish here as you are on Mylot you little stretched out cunt
And YOU anonymous have a stretched out potty mouth! Does it make you proud? Do you kiss your mother with that mouth? Do you really think you can hide for long behind such a weak ID?
Talk about rubbish - 'well hello anonymous, welcome to the garbage heap' The garbage heap of YOUR words!
My god I love the laughing puppy I just had to say that. LOL!!! It is just to adorable.
But to anonymous this is an open forum for anyone to write anything from what I understand ... I have not slandered you or berrated you here have I .. Do I come to your door and say a bunch of foul mouthed words no. I conduct myself in a manner that I would want others to conduct theirself in front of me. I'm sorry that you have no taste for what I write but you need not say it like that. You could have just not said anything at all and walked away.
Sounds like a 12 year old that just learned a new dirty word.... I swear the maturity of some people make me sick.
Anglewhispers I couldn't agree with you more. Thank you for your post here.
I was going to write something to your first poster, but I think that the new Playboy has come out so he will be busy. Don't sprain that wrist now.
Bella, I love this. Tangle me up in those sheets and take me to heaven. I am like Oliver Twist with your writing, I always want more.
I know Ihave to work on this one too. LOL!! I have a ton of work cut out for me but I'm hoping by the end of this year I'll have it. done. LOL!!!
Why do you write filthy things? Why do you use such filthy language?
Write something that is uplifting and encouraging, not filthy, sinful, repulsive!
You can do much BETTER than that!
What I wrote was not to "anonymous" but to bella. Her writings are filthy. There is way too much filth in this world and we don't need more!
Anonymous used an ugly word, but Bella also uses ugly, filthy words in her/his writings. The context is ugly and filthy as well.
Whim - this is not filthy. Sexy, racy, yes. But it is also a new writer finding her feet. Constructive criticism is welcome. Abuse is not!
Whim if you don't like it please don't read it. I have written that if your critism is not constructive then you need not post. I hear you .. But I don't see you picketing Laurell K. Hamilton who is a best selling author and writes in this style. So my style is not yours I get that and this is erotic fiction. Which has a genre all it's own. My writing had no vulgarity or swearing.. It has innuendo but I didn't say anything other than the F word which wasn't even spelled out the whole way. I also stated that he wanted to pin her and lick every inch of her body not that he did it.
I'm sorry that you senses do not like it but there are other blogs that might be more geared to you. I'm not being mean or harassing you which you seem to have taken a special interest in me .. I have no idea why. I have not come onto you page and request or demand that you look or even read that which you do not like.
So Thank you for your thought it has been noted but this is the style and genre that I'm thinking of writing in. Have a nice night.
Why don't you write something inspirational? Something that will make a difference in someone's life? Something positive?
I believe you can do MUCH better than this.
There is way too much ugliness in books, tv, etc. Let's have some good, clean and positive writing. Something that will help others, not make them think that doing something wrong is ok.
Whim - just how well do you know bella if you so firmly believe she can do better than this?
Bella is who she is. She is kind, loyal, thoughtful and full of imagination. These stories of her are not the sum total of her being. They are simply a part of it. That she chooses to write this way is her RIGHT and if you don't like it then write something inspirational of your own to counteract it. But stop trying to make her feel less of the good and wonderful person she is. That is decidedly UNINSPIRATIONAL and unChristian.
Whim - I find Bella's work inspirational and fresh. It is the result of hours of hard work on her behalf. If her stories were about warfare, gangland killing or Mob violence would you feel the same way? I find it extremely difficult to believe that you bothered to come all the way to this Blog, through the Adult Content Warning just to carp. We are all quite transparent here. Our names are clear to see. I can promise you that your views will be taken much more seriously if you cast off this pseudonym and post the name that I am sure that we all know you better as. Otherwise, you have had your say and I think that Bella has made herself clear about how she feels.
Thanks Fifty and Pike. I appreciate the support.
Whim,
I hear what you are saying I'm not a very religious person. I have my beliefs and they are mine. My writing is not going to make someone do what they don't want to do. I don't hold a gun and say life is this way or else. I'm very tolerant of everyone.. That being said I write what I write because that is what I feel comfortable with and I'm good at. I don't believe that my novels or shorts will inspire anyone to go out and have sex. I'm 30 I've been married and I have 5 kids. I don't hide that I say it in my profile. I have a boyfriend that I have been with for 7yrs now to me commitment doesn't have to be marriage.
For some reason I get the feeling that becuase I'm not about a relationship with the creator your upset.
Again I'm sorry that we do not see eye to eye on this. I do not feel that my writting is going to enspire anyone to go out and do anything other than buy another book or look for more of my writtings or it will show them that this isn't what they want to read.
Have a nice day Whim.
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